The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The maps illustrate the changing of Norbiton
town
from factory
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a factory
area
to developed
residential Correct article usage
a developed
area
plan in the future.
Overall
, currently
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,currently
town
of Norniton
is located with many factories which are beside the road. Correct your spelling
Norton
On the other hand
, in the future, the industrial area
will be replaced by the expanded residential area
.
In
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At
the
present, Correct article usage
apply
the
Norbiton Correct article usage
apply
town
is fulled
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full
with
industrialization, Change preposition
of
also
all of them are just next to the main road. The farming area
that is
on the north is divided from the factories site by the river. Moreover
, there is a single roundabout and two main roads that are branched out. While
in the future of Norbiton town
, the housing area
such
as houses, shops, playground, school and medical centre will be constructed next to two roundabouts and four main roads. However
, the houses and agriculture area
on the other side that is
segregated by the river will be connected by the bridge.Submitted by rakboonraksa.s on
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