The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
The table compares the percentages of
carbohydrates
,
protein
, and fat in three types of average
diet
, healthy
diet
, and healthy
diet
for
sport
. From the figures, it can be inferred that the highest distribution belongs to
carbohydrates
.
Also
,
protein
and fat take up the second and third proportions of three different diets, respectively.
Furthermore
, it is noticeable that the percentages of
carbohydrates
and
protein
are equal. In a healthy
diet
,
carbohydrates
experience half of a healthy
diet
.
While
this
figure increases by 10% in a healthy
diet
for
sport
and decreases exactly
this
number in an average
diet
.
Also
, the average and healthy
diet
contain equal distribution, about 20% which is 5% higher than for
sport
people. the proportion of
protein
in a healthy
diet
is just under one-
third,
and the average
diet
constitutes exactly two-fifths.
In contrast
, individuals who do the
sport
consume the lowest amount of
protein
which is about 25%.
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