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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely believed that fast
food
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 results in a rising number of
people
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 having health diseases, and the government should act to address
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 problem by imposing a tariff on that kind of
food
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. From my perspective, I disagree with that opinion for two main reasons discussed below. The first reason for
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 not only that fast
food
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 causes health problems. Diseases that
people
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 have to suffer from come from a combination of numerous factors. Researchers prove that obesity, a disease that many
people
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 think is led by fast
food
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, is probably associated with molecular biological signs.
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, the abnormal transformation of fat to energy is caused by a gene in the human genome, so the body will accumulate fat and cause obesity.
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,
people
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 who are keen on eating fast
food
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 but have a good habit of exercising still have a healthy life.
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, a higher tax will affect the price of
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, which may lead to some social evils. A prime example of
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 that poor
people
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 in developing countries normally have difficulties reaching well-qualified foods like organic
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 or supplements.
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, the action of levying a tax on junk
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 will create a barrier for the poor to be able to afford
food
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 on a daily basis, which leads to malnutrition.
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,
this
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 problem may result in the rise of social problems like burglary or cheating, because of a lack of
food
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 or money to buy
food
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. In conclusion, fast
food
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 seems to be one of the bad factors causing health problems,
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, using a higher tax on them is not a reasonable solution. I personally believe that there are other useful ways to promote
people
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's awareness towards eating junk
food
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 properly,
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 other feasible solutions to diminish the use of fast
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 rather than
taxing
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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