The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map gives information about a plan to develop a new supermarket in the
city
in two achievable locations. The first location is in the town centre with no traffic zone and the second one is in the countryside. Use synonyms
Overall
, the second place is the most recommended area to build the supermarket.
As can be seen from the data, developing supermarkets in the town centre will gain more customers. Linking Words
This
position is near Bransdon Linking Words
City
with a 15000 population and 25 km from Cransdon Use synonyms
City
with a 29000 population. Use synonyms
Besides
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this
section is in the middle of the Garlsdon Linking Words
City
resident settlement which has a 65000 population, Use synonyms
this
position is Linking Words
also
traversed by the railway followed by high public mobility.
Expanding a new supermarket in the countryside will winnings customers from Hindon Linking Words
City
, a small Use synonyms
city
which is a distance 12 km from Garlsdon Use synonyms
City
. The second reason to select Use synonyms
this
area is close to railways, main roads, and industry areas which will bring more purchasers.Linking Words
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