The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
usage
of technologies
by the
US households from 1995 to 2000.
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apply
Overall
, it is clear that
all technologies
use
by Change the form of the verb
used
residentals
increased Correct your spelling
residents
residential
thoughout
the Correct your spelling
throughout
period
, despite fluctuations. Only washing machine
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machines
accounts
for the highest ratio between 1995 and 1999.
All the lines of the graph have different starting Wrong verb form
accounted
point
in 1995. Over the Fix the agreement mistake
points
period
, the usage
of washing machine
and computer increased steadily. There was 60% to 80% of washing machine Fix the agreement mistake
machines
usage
, which was the most use
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used
of
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apply
technologies
by residentals
in the US. Correct your spelling
residents
Likewise
, the percentage of housholds
Correct your spelling
households
used
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that used
computer
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a computer
was
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apply
similarly
increased from 40% to 70%. The period
from 1995 to 1999 saw a significantly
change in phone Change the adverb
significant
uses
by Fix the agreement mistake
use
residental
in the US, from below 20% up to almost 80%.
In the 1995-1999 Correct your spelling
residents
period
, there were
a minor fluctuation in Change the verb form
was
Internet
and DVD player index. The Correct article usage
the Internet
usage
of the Internet by households hit a low of 10% in 1995 which was the lowest starting point beyond other technologies
. DVD
player uses in the US dropped steadily from 25% to 15% between 1995 and 1996 but Add an article
A DVD
then
it rose constantly to 40% in 1999.Submitted by hoangmyvan1904 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usage, technologies, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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