The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009

The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009
The charts explain the popularity of leisure activities
according to
a survey in the US
across
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1999 and 2009. Generally speaking, what stands out from the charts is that walking was the most popular work in leisure time each year.
However
, in 1999 yoga and in 2009 jogging was the least popular choices. In 1999, walking accounts for 29%, which was 12% more than soccer and 16% more than aerobics. Yoga and jogging,
on the other hand
, had the two smallest proportions of leisure activities with 5% and 7% respectively.
Additionally
, camping and bicycling were responsible for 8% and 12% respectively. Focusing on 2009, walking again had the greatest contribution with 31%, after that soccer and swimming raised by 1% and 9% in 1999 respectively and took 18% of total activities.
In contrast
, aerobics fell from 13% to 4% , which was the second smallest percentage
this
year.
Similarly
, jogging faced
such
a downfall trend and declined by 4%.
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