the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories
The bar chart illustrates the average number of minutes in
billion
of
telephone calls in the UK divided into three types from 1995 until 2002. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that the local line
users was
decreasing, Change the verb form
were
while
the others increased.
To begin
with, in 1995, the fixed line
place
the highest amount of time, with around 70 Wrong verb form
placed
billion
. It experienced a steady rise until it reached a peak at exactly 90 billion
, and remain stable from 1998 to 1999. However
, it dropped by nearly 20 billion
to the same point as it began.
On the other hand
, in
the beginning of the trend, national and international Change the preposition
at
fixed
Add a hyphen
fixed-line
line
users was
higher compared to mobiles, with just below 40 Change the verb form
were
billion
and 5 billion
each. They climbed up gradually, while
the biggest gap for mobiles
conversations Change the noun form
mobile
were
in 2000, which has a twofold rise. From Change the verb form
was
this
point onwards those types kept rising until national and international fixed line
conversation arrive at 60 billion
, and mobiles
conversation with 45 Change the noun form
mobile
billion
minutes coversations
.Correct your spelling
conversations
conversation
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