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‏In many countries, schoolchildren are required to wear school uniforms. ‏Do you think this should this be enforced in all schools?

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It has become a trend in many countries that pupils must wear
uniform
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 to resemblant with each other. I opine that
this
 is an
affarmative
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affirmative
 procedure and should be obligatory in all schools. some
notion
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 surround my idea.
to begin
 with, schools are spots
that
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 students should
concenterate
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concentrate
 on their
study
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studies
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 without having tension about trivial things
such
 as their
looking
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looks
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 and physical appearance.
therefore
, enforcement for putting on the same cloth can pick up a heavy burden from their shoulders and be stress relief per se.
in
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 addition, wearing the same cloth is a positive way to reduce the class gap among the
childeren
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children
 which is a significant issue
specially
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 at the early ages
while
 the students are more vulnerable. to exemplify, surveys have shown that schools which prescribed
an
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 uniform for their pupils were more likely to exhibit illustrious education results from their students.
compare
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 to others.
furthuremore
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Furthermore
, that would be an
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 for
parents
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 psyche and society. student,
as a result
 of
exposing
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 to fashion and peer
pressure
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 may
persist
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encourage
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 their parents to purchase novel clothes
and
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that
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which
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 may
leads
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 to
upset
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 the family budget.
moreover
, nurturing the culture of consumerism from
early
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ages
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 can collapse a society's future by the creation
of
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feeling that individuals are not enough unless they buy certain
material
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materials
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.
for
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 instance,
to sum up
,
i
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 reiterate that considering
uniform
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a uniform
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 as a formal
cloth
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clothing
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 for children can have many prominent effects and that should be
promuglate
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promulgated
promulgate
 by
government
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the government
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 to lessen the stress and the strain
of
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on
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 pupils.
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coherence and cohesion
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task response
Address the prompt more directly and provide specific examples to support your points.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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