Your friend invited you to his/her birthday, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you cannot go explain why you didn’t contact him/hear sooner suggest another time and place to meet

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Dear Meha, How's going? Hope you are well and still enjoying your time at university. How are you going on in your current subject? I told you that one is tough to crack. Didn't I? Believe me, when I received your invitation to your birthday party I was delighted to meet you soon. In fact, I cannot wait to see you.but what a nightmare

this

time I am not able to attend your party. Actually, my employer is holding a training programme on the very same day and

this

is important I cannot back off. They would not give me any hours if I would not finish

this

training. You know very well how it is hard to get jobless in

this

period of recession. I have no option left but to stick with

this

job. So sorry, it's all a bit

last

minute. I would let you know soon as I had known it. I am still pissed that I am not able to see you and celebrate your special day with you. If it is ok with you. We can meet up next month as I can come and stay for at least two days. I have already checked the weather it is going to be sunny for a whole week. So, It would not trouble us. I promise we will spend time together. Do you reckon your favourite restaurant in the town ? They have been serving new addition to their menu.will go there too. Let me know ASAP what's best for you. Love to see you for coffee and catch up. Yours lovingly, Payal

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

268 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your friend invited you to his/her birthday, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you cannot go explain why you didn’t contact him/hear sooner suggest another time and place to meet

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