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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all theri time and attention to study for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some students nowadays show interest in studying different
subjects
 alongside their own major. As
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doubt about it.
This
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prsonally
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personally
 believe
although
this
 can be beneficial for some
subjects
, the approach is uncalled-for in some cases. Those who argue about learning various
subjects
 usually argue that
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students
 are required to stay away from distractive factors,
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thero
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their
 full attention to
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their
 own major to achieve
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 level of proficiency.
For instance
, physicians who deal with bacteria,
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disease
diseases
 and nutrition facts are better stay away
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subjects
such
 as art during their course time and there is no causal relationship between these
subjects
 to follow simultaneously.
On the other hand
, learning other skills can be beneficial, compelling and sometimes necessary for some
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fields
. To clarify, marketing, art or tourism are
subjects
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 merged into other fields. In
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this
 brings an enormous opportunity to university students as they are more likely to become versatile workers in the future.
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 will
also
 help them to
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broaden
 their horizons and deal with difficulties
also
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 a tourism expert who knows two languages or marketing techniques
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 will be more likely to convince job recruiters.
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 in some extra fields of studying is useful, in others is considered to be
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 of
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time.
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