You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: ###say which points in the article you agree with ###explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres ###offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Editor, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to discuss with you regarding your article published

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week. I found out that you have discussed our

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in every detail, and in your ,opinion it has a similar structure as other

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centres

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. I agree with almost all the points you mentioned in the article but I have some reservations regarding the

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centre structure that you have highlighted. In comparison with other

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centres

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, Our

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provides us with the area for the parks

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a sports ground. Other than that we have many restaurants and grocery shops which can not be seen in other

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centres

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, we have community

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where different kinds of activities are organized, and people engage with each other. I have been in

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city for years and I know much about what it offers to the people. It would be a great idea if we can have a short tour of

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town

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and it will help you as well to know the best facilities in our

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. Let me know if you are interested in

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. In anticipation of your response, I shall remain. Thanks and regards, Ahsan Ali

ahsanaly.94Mon Aug 14 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

206 words

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