You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: ###say which points in the article you agree with ###explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres ###offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Editor, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to discuss with you regarding your article published

last

week. I found out that you have discussed our

town

in every detail, and in your ,opinion it has a similar structure as other

town

centres

. I agree with almost all the points you mentioned in the article but I have some reservations regarding the

town

centre structure that you have highlighted. In comparison with other

town

centres

, Our

town

provides us with the area for the parks

as well as

a sports ground. Other than that we have many restaurants and grocery shops which can not be seen in other

town

centres

Moreover

, we have community

centres

where different kinds of activities are organized, and people engage with each other. I have been in

this

city for years and I know much about what it offers to the people. It would be a great idea if we can have a short tour of

this

town

and it will help you as well to know the best facilities in our

town

. Let me know if you are interested in

this

. In anticipation of your response, I shall remain. Thanks and regards, Ahsan Ali

Submitted by ahsanaly.94 on Mon Aug 14 2023

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