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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

#behaviour #schools #effects
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Children
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 are behaving differently in school these days. It has been increasingly challenging for school teachers to manage both students’ academic progress and their behaviour. In
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 essay, we will discuss about 2 root causes of
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 issue and ways to
mitigate
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. The main reasons are
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the internet
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internet
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, and
parents
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 spending less
time
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 with their
children
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. With
technology
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 advancement, smartphones,
tablets
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and tablets
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 are part of our daily lives.
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 means
children
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 are
under
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at
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 high risk to be exposed to explicit
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of
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on
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 the internet
such
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 as violence, sexual, etc. At
young
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age
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children
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 are unable to differentiate between right and wrong and prolonged exposure to explicit
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 causes detrimental effects
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 their behaviour.
Besides
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 that, most of the
parents
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 have busy schedules, trying to make ends meet and
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 reduces their interaction
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 with
children
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.
Consequently
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,
children
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 develop anti-social behaviours in
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 of seeking
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apply
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their
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parents
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parent's
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 attention. There are possible ways to resolve these challenges.
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 with smart gadget obsession,
parents
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 could restrict their
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children
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children's
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 screen
time
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 to only 30 mins daily or set up
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rules
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such
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 as no hand phone usage
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dinner
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the dinner
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 table. On the internet
content
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,
parents
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 can make use of
content
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 filtration
feature
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features
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 in order for their
children
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 to browse in
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 safe environment.
Secondly
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,
parents
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 have to
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 spending quality
time
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 with their
children
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.
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, catching up about the day during dinner meal is a good start to make their
children
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 feel cared
and
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for and
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 loved. In conclusion, prevention is better than cure.
Parents
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 have to put in effort for their
children
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 to grow up well and reduce potential social
issue
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issues
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 in the future.
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