Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
Children
are behaving differently in school these days. It has been increasingly challenging for school teachers to manage both students’ academic progress and their behaviour. In this
essay, we will discuss about 2 root causes of this
issue and ways to mitigate
.
The main reasons are Correct pronoun usage
themmitigate
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
, and Capitalize word
Internet
parents
spending less time
with their children
. With technology
advancement, smartphones, Replace the word
technological
tablets
are part of our daily lives. Correct word choice
and tablets
This
means children
are under
high risk to be exposed to explicit Change preposition
at
content
of
the internet Change preposition
on
such
as violence, sexual, etc. At young
Add an article
a young
age
Add a comma
,age
children
are unable to differentiate between right and wrong and prolonged exposure to explicit content
causes detrimental effects to
their behaviour. Change preposition
on
Besides
that, most of the parents
have busy schedules, trying to make ends meet and this
reduces their interaction time
with children
. Consequently
, children
develop anti-social behaviours in hope
of seeking Correct article usage
the hope
for
their Change preposition
apply
parents
attention.
There are possible ways to resolve these challenges. Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
Firstly
with smart gadget obsession, parents
could restrict their children
screen Change noun form
children's
time
to only 30 mins daily or set up rule
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rules
such
as no hand phone usage on
Change preposition
at
dinner
table. On the internet Add an article
the dinner
a dinner
content
, parents
can make use of content
filtration feature
in order for their Fix the agreement mistake
features
children
to browse in an
safe environment. Change the article
a
Secondly
, parents
have to priorities
spending quality Replace the word
prioritise
time
with their children
. For example
, catching up about the day during dinner meal is a good start to make their children
feel cared and
loved.
In conclusion, prevention is better than cure. Change preposition
for and
Parents
have to put in effort for their children
to grow up well and reduce potential social issue
in the future.Fix the agreement mistake
issues
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