Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

Children
are behaving differently in school these days. It has been increasingly challenging for school teachers to manage both students’ academic progress and their behaviour. In
this
essay, we will discuss about 2 root causes of
this
issue and ways to
mitigate
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. The main reasons are
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the internet
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internet
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, and
parents
spending less
time
with their
children
. With
technology
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advancement, smartphones,
tablets
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and tablets
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are part of our daily lives.
This
means
children
are
under
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high risk to be exposed to explicit
content
of
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the internet
such
as violence, sexual, etc. At
young
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age
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children
are unable to differentiate between right and wrong and prolonged exposure to explicit
content
causes detrimental effects
to
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their behaviour.
Besides
that, most of the
parents
have busy schedules, trying to make ends meet and
this
reduces their interaction
time
with
children
.
Consequently
,
children
develop anti-social behaviours in
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of seeking
for
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their
parents
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parent's
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attention. There are possible ways to resolve these challenges.
Firstly
with smart gadget obsession,
parents
could restrict their
children
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screen
time
to only 30 mins daily or set up
rule
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rules
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such
as no hand phone usage
on
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dinner
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the dinner
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table. On the internet
content
,
parents
can make use of
content
filtration
feature
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features
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in order for their
children
to browse in
an
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safe environment.
Secondly
,
parents
have to
priorities
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spending quality
time
with their
children
.
For example
, catching up about the day during dinner meal is a good start to make their
children
feel cared
and
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loved. In conclusion, prevention is better than cure.
Parents
have to put in effort for their
children
to grow up well and reduce potential social
issue
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issues
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in the future.
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