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Some people prefered to be self employed whereas others like working for companies or institutions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. which do you think is a better approach.

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Many people prefer to
work
 in a
company
 or
an institutions
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institutions
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 where
are
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some people opine
in
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on
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self employed
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self-employed
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. There are pros and cons
of
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to
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 both
the
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apply
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aspects. There
i
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I
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 will discuss each aspect. There are lots of advantages and disadvantages of
self employed
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self-employed
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.
Firstly
, owning a
business
 allows freedom of
work
.
For
example
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,example
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 if a man wants to earn more he works more and if doesn't want to
work
than
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then
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 no
one
force
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forces
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 him to do so. There is no income barrier in
owing
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owning
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 a
business
.
Secondly
, when there are ups and downs
then
one
 can suffer from that. There are no sick leaves or pensions in owning a
business
.
On the other hand
, working in a
company
 had great benefits
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, for example,
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for example
one
 can get sick leaves, pensions and if
company
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the company
a company
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 is doing well
then
 employees get bonuses etc. but sometimes there is
lot
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a lot
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 of mental
as well as
 physical pressure on employees when there is
overload
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an overload
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 of
work
. I assert that doing
a
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apply
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business
 is far better than a job if there are no financial barriers and in starting
career
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the career
a career
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 of
one
 or two years
one
 should get experience from a reputed
company
. In conclusion, working in both
company
as well as
self employed
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self-employed
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 have their own pros and cons.
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