More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development? Huy Cao
In the Fourth Technological Revolution, there are more and more cutting-edge innovations are being born. Artificial Intelligence has become increasingly prevalent, playing a vital role both at home and in the workplace. I believe
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coherence cohesion
Ensure a clearer distinction between points by using more paragraph breaks. For instance, separate discussions of workplace and housework applications.
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Expand on the potential drawbacks or limitations of relying on robots at home and work to provide a more balanced view.
coherence cohesion
Include a thesis statement in your introduction that clearly outlines your main points and provides a roadmap for your essay.
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Good use of examples, such as the moon exploration robot and VinFast car assembly robots, to illustrate your points.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a strong introduction and conclusion that clearly presents the author's view.
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There is a clear understanding of the positive aspects of robot use, both in dangerous jobs and household chores.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite