some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere to what extent do you agree with this view
Art reflects the heritage of a particular place. of ,course craft and artist plays an important role for conserve our ancestral culture and the creativity of artists. in my ,belief the government should spend funds on the arts and artists.
in my point of view, when finances are utilized for the craft.
for example
, in India we can see a lot of monuments , sculptures, artefacts , and buildings i.e the Taj Mahal , they all greatly attracted tourists from all over the world . On the other ,hand preserving the art .hence
, it will attract tourism therefore
improve the economy,Correct word choice
and therefore
subsequently
funds which are being collected from travel industries will contribute to elevating the nation's economy.
to conclude
, the government should spend money on art to preserve our ancient buildings and boost the economy through tourism.Submitted by kdilpreet631 on
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