When you learn a foreign language, all four skills(listening, reading, speaking and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that all foreign languages need to be studied
all
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skills
for listening, reading, speaking and writing.
However
, others do not need to
study
all the
skills
. I strongly believe that they have to
study
all
skills
. The way of studying is good for people who want to speak
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well foreign
language
. In Korea, students should take foreign
language
tests
such
as English at school. The test needs just reading and listening. They hope to aim for a high score. Because
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they do not need to
study
all
skills
for only the test.
Also
,if they need to use a foreign
language
while
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abroad. In the travel spots, they do not need to speak very well.But, they can communicate by very simple and easy speaking or writing. Because
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they are just travelling.
On the other hand
, if they want to live abroad. They should have good
sklls
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skills
of
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foreign
language
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languages
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. At the time, if they are only speaking or just listening. They would be had
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communicating with
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those
around
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.
As a result
, they would have problems with getting a job, studying and making friends.
Also
, when they
study
for foreign
language
, they have
difficult
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for
study
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of only one
skll
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skill
such
as only speaking and only writing. If they want to speak a foreign
language
very well, they should
study
listening and writing.
Likewise
,if they want to write
foreign
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language
very well, they should
study
reading and listening. Because
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the
skills
are needed by each other. The mentioned above, I think that foreign
language
study
needs all
skills
(listening, reading, speaking and writing).
However
, if they need a basic level of foreign
language
for a simple trip and short communication, they should
do
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not need to
study
all the
sklls
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skills
.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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