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There have been many inventions in human history, such as wheels. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#inventions #history #wheels #people #internet
Some
people
 argue that the
internet
 is the most significant
invention
 throughout the
history
 of human beings.
However
, I strongly believe that it is a very important
invention
 but it is not the greatest as other
inventions
. When it comes to the
internet
,it is very useful and a lot of
people
 use it all over the world. After the
internet
 was invented,
people
's lives many changed more
convenient
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 and made
the
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apply
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many jobs for
about
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industry.
Also
, in the past, when
people
 wanted to search for
information
, they went to the library or bookstore and
then
 found
information
 in several books. But, nowadays, they
serach
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search
 for
information
 on the desk by computer.
Although
 it is very simple, the number of
information
 is very varied and very large.
On the other hand
, if the computer was not
invention
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, the
internet
 was not invented.
Also
, computers were not invented
that
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which
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 is why they do not have electricity
invention
. And, smartphones, metaverse, blockchain, ar, etc have
invened
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invented
invested
 in recent days.
Also
, they are impossible to develop that
do
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does
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 not have the
internet
. Like
this
, the
inventions
' ranking
are
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 difficult to decide. They are all
inventions
 of
inovation
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innovation
 and essential in human
history
. Probably, the most important
inventions
 have continued to
chang
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change
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 the
sociaty
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society
inviornment
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environment
. In the hunting very important age, weapon
inventions
 were very important , and
at
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 the moving very important age
are
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wheels were very important
inventions
. For the reason mentioned above, I would disagree with my opinion because human
history
 had important
inventions
 always at the other age and
other
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in other
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sociaty inviornment
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social environments
.
Therefore
, the
internet
 is a very important
invention
, but wheels, lights, computers,electricity etc are very important
inventions
 too. Throughout human
history
, important
inventions
 have always emerged in different ages and societal environments
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