The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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percentage
of total
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the total
population
living in the cities in four different countries in Asia between 1970 and 2020 and also
the predictions for 10 to 20 years later in 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, it can be seen that the population
among four Asian countries witnessed an increase with expectations showing that it will incline dramatically. The population
in Malaysia is predicted to be the highest in 2040 from
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the lowest percentage
of population
in 2040 will be positioned by Thailand.
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in Malaysia stood at 30% and doubled over the next 30 years to level off at 40%. Since then
, it has experienced a considerable increase and is expected to reach 80% in 2030 and 85% in 2040. Moving to Indonesia, the population
began at only 14% in the initial year but it went up to 50% in 2020. It is estimated that the proportion of population
will rise considerably to 60% in 2040.
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the Philippines
then
rose to 75% during the following 50 years. Population
in the Philippines is expected to experience an uplift in 2030 and 2040 until it reaches a peak at 55%. Meanwhile, the Correct article usage
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percentage
of population
in Thailand in 1970 was around 19% and increased to 30% in 1990. Add an article
the population
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