The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied chart provides information about the average
rainfall
by month for
last
year,
while
the graph illustrates the average
rainfall
by month for the
last
40 years in Australia.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the season when the transition between summer and autumn happens was the main drizzle period for both
last
year and the
last
40 years in Australia.
According to
the bar chart, monthly totals in January, February and March made up approximately 60 mm of
rainfall
, remaining the biggest for the
last
year.
By contrast
, from the end of the summer to October, the average
rainfall
was the least with a count of 10 mm. As can be seen from the line graph, for the
last
40-year period, January was the most rainy month in Australia. Meanwhile, September had eight times less
rainfall
. The graph follows the pattern that the
rainfall
rate declined starting from the winter to the autumn and rose again to the winter.
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