The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below

The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below
The provided bar graph illustrates information about the change in children who are between 5 and 14 years old and live in Australia selected
activities
for
leisure
in their free time, with data presented on a percentage scale.
Overall
, almost all children selected watching TV/videos.
However
, only about three in ten children selected
skaeteboarding
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skateboarding
/rollerblading. In detail, electric and computer games were selected by nine
in
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of
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ten
boys
. The
figure
is
2nd
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the 2nd
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highest of all
leisure
activities
.
Also
, the
boys
selected bike riding and
skeateboarding
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skateboarding
/rollerblading , about 70% and 40%
repectively
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respectively
. And, the
leisure
activities
were the lowest choice among
boys
was art and craft. The
figure
was only around 30
percent
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per cent
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. When it comes to girls' patterns, they too the best like to spend their free time
for
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apply
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watching TV/videos. And, bike riding , electric/computer games and art /
craft
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crafts
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that
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apply
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had almost the same
figure
at around 60%. Among them, bike riding and electric/computer games
figure
lower than
boys'
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boys figure
figure
. But, art and craft
leisure
activities
are more interesting than
boys
. And, the worst interesting
leisure
activities
was
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were
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skeateboarding
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skateboarding
and rollerblading, with a
figure
of
aroud
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around
20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, leisure, boys, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • engagement levels
  • leisure activities
  • downward trend
  • popularity
  • participation rates
  • comparisons
  • analyze
  • general trends
  • highlight
  • significance
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