The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart and table give information about Anthropology
students
from a single university that works in 5 different types of jobs after graduation and the amount of their income after 5 years.
Overall
, the highest and lowest percentage belong to students
who work
Full-time and Part-time with postgrad study respectively.
After an undergraduate degree ,course 52% of Anthropology graduates get Full-time jobs and followed by 15% of them have part-time work
.In addition
, students
who have Part-time and Full- time positions with postgrad studies reach just under 10%.
In 3 different types of employment,the maximum rate of salaries above 75000 belongs to freelance consultants and the government sector. Meanwhile, the percentage of income above 75000 for people who work
in private companies is 55%.Finally
, Anthropology students
who work
in private companies have most salaries under 75000 in addition
, for the other two jobs, the income rate is the same and 20%.Submitted by shokri.hananeh on
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