The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The pie chart illustrates data about the occupation status of Anthropology graduates from a particular university,
whereas
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the table reveals information about the salaries of the anthropologists after five years of
work
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experience.
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, almost half of the graduated students
work
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full-time, and those Anthropologists who
work
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in the government sector earn more money. If we look at the pie chart, it is evident that full-time employees accounted for 52% of the total,
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the lowest proportion of graduates are working part-time and studying as a postgraduation student at the same time, by only 5%. It is notable that 12% of graduates are unemployed.
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, those who decided to be full-time postgrad students comprised 8% of the whole chart. Looking at the table, most of the anthropologists with 5 years of
work
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experience who are working as freelance consultants are earning between 74,000 and 99,999 dollars per year, by 40%.
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, 50% of government employees are being paid more than 100,000$ each year. As regards workers in private companies, the highest percentage of them is being paid between 50,000 and 74,999 dollars, by 35%.
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