Music play an important role in society, others think it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is people started are divided on

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perception

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music

. It is undeniable that listening to

music

has become an essential part of our life.

However

, there is no absolute agreement on whether it should be counted as

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role in our social life or it is just for fun and

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. A commonly held belief is that

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help with expressing feeling and

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from being in a blue. As evidence of

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they point to a huge range of artists

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their experiences and inner emotions to which listeners can relate.

Furthermore

, there are plenty of situations when listeners

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in darker times, and they were able to pass those days

due to

the

music

that described a moment close to theirs. It could be explained by the fact that every song

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that everything is going to be

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in the end.

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it leads to the fact that

music

is not just about having, but

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it has healing properties.

On the other hand

, some people claim that

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does not have

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deep meanings and it is just for entertainment.

For instance

, they may mention that they

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other

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.

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dancing and karaoke singing. The explanation lies in the fact that they express their emotions without

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deeper into the meaning of the lyrics.

Therefore

, there group of individuals

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receive a dopamine rush and enjoy their time

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listening to

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taking everything mentioned into

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I would argue that

music

is created for all citizens and everyone has their own rights on how to perceive the idea of

music

.