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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These two tables display the
exchange
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students
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 from universities in
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 between 2007 and 2009. There are two types of
exchange
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students
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, who went from
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 and from
Australia
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 to
Europe
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.
Overall
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, as you can see difference, on the one hand, the number of
Exchange
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students
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 from universities in
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 has increased from 186 to 226 between 2007 and 2009,
on the other hand
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, the number of
Exchange
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students
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 from universities in
Australia
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 to
Europe
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 has not changed at all, in general. In
Exchange
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students
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 who were from
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 between 2007 and 2009, France decreased from 61 to 60, Sweden increased from 32 to 42, the United Kingdom decreased from 31 to 25, Germany significantly increased from 27 to 63, The Netherlands was the same. And in
Exchange
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students
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 who were from
Australia
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 to
Europe
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, France increased from 37 to 58, Sweden decreased from 33 to 27 and the United Kingdom
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 decreased from 32 to 23, Germany increased from 18 to 26, the Netherlands highly fell from 32 to 18.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exchange, students, europe, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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