With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered area of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extend do you agree?
From the starting point of human history, people
had
needed Wrong verb form
have
energy
for their lives. In our modern world, the population getting larger day by day, and because of this
, the global industry's energy
demand rate climbing sharply and companies wanted
and Wrong verb form
want
supported
the idea which looking for new fossil fuel Wrong verb form
support
resources
in new potential areas. While
there are some strong reasons, I completely disagree with this
opinion in some ways. This
essay will point out the reasons why I am staying on the opposite side the discovering new hydrocarbon resources
.
Firstly
, they are completely harmful to our environment. Especially cars whose engines use oil that produces CO2 every day. Our air was quality incredibly unhealthy. Because of the air conditions, our plants are also
poisoned and we need to eat them. We need to eat poison. There is a circle which starts the resources
area to our table, full of harmful chemicals.
Secondly
, virgin areas have some special flora and fauna. When the companies try to find new energy
sources, probably
they destroy Rephrase
apply
this
unique region. Rare animals and endemic plants will die because of the making of more cosmetics and Mcdonalds'. It is not fair. We can stay alive without any cosmetic product but animals can not survive without water, trees and soil. We need to respect their homes, their
life rights. Correct word choice
and their
In addition
, If we really need more energy
, we can use sustainable resources
such
as sun, wind, water and wave
. Fix the agreement mistake
waves
Although
they are not 100 % environmentally friendly, according to
hydrocarbon resources
, they are obviously less harmful.
In conclusion, there are some parts of the world that do
not open to searching for new oil and gas supplies. Verb problem
are
However
many think that those areas should be open for searching, I completely disagree with that thought because of same reasons which I had already explained.Submitted by onurkovaci0 on
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