The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in on area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and pie charts show the data of
police
fund
in the years 2017 and 2018. The table provides information about how the Fix the agreement mistake
funds
police
money
came from different sources including national government, local taxes and other sources in 2017 and 2018. While
the pie charts compare the percentage of spending money
that was divided into 3 parts for police
between 2017 and 2018.
Overall
, the most police’s
income was from the national government. Change noun form
police
In contrast
, the least police
budget was collected from other resources such
as rewards. However
, the majority of the expenditure was used for police
officer’s salaries whereas
technology was the least concern for both years.
It is evident that most of money
obtains from Add an article
the money
national
government in Add an article
the national
Change the article
the year
year
2017 and 2018 stood at 175.5 million and 177.8 million respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
years
On the other hand
, approximately 38 million was gain
from other things.
In 2017 and 2018, more than half of Wrong verb form
gained
money
was separated Correct article usage
the money
to
Change preposition
into
staff’s
salaries Change noun form
staff
accounted
for 75% and 69% respectively. But the part of buildings and transportation stayed the same at 17%. Even though, the least amount of Wrong verb form
accounting
money
was given to technology in both years. There was a 6% increase of
Change preposition
in
technological
section in the year 2018.Correct article usage
the technological
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