The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line chart illustrates the
consumption
of fish and Use synonyms
some
several types of meat in a European nation over 25 years.
Correct quantifier usage
apply
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Linking Words
Use synonyms
consumption
of chicken Correct article usage
the consumption
increase
dramatically Wrong verb form
increased
druing
Correct your spelling
during
given
period, Correct article usage
the given
while
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beaf
and Correct your spelling
beef
leaf
lamp
Correct your spelling
lamb
showd
Correct your spelling
showed
show
shown
Correct article usage
a sharply
sharply
decline and fish showed Change the word
sharp
relatively
Correct article usage
a relatively
unchange
. Correct your spelling
change
Furthermore
, some kinds of food reach their peak and lowest point at certain years.
Looking at Linking Words
line
graph in more detail, Correct article usage
the line
regarding
of Change preposition
apply
consumption
of chicken showed Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a dramtaiclly
dramtaiclly
raise over Correct your spelling
dramatically
drastically
given
period from 145 to 250 grams per individual per Correct article usage
a given
week
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
consumption
Use synonyms
chicken
Change preposition
of chicken
reach
Change the verb form
reaches
zenith
at Correct pronoun usage
its zenith
year
2002 at approximately 252 grams per Change the article
the year
person
per Use synonyms
week
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
consumption
of fish was Use synonyms
lowest
and showed relatively unaltered over Correct article usage
the lowest
given
period from 52 to 49 per Add an article
a given
person
per Use synonyms
week
.
When it comes to other kinds of food, the Use synonyms
consumption
of beef reach a peak in 1984 at around 248 per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
and it reach Use synonyms
lowest
point in 2002 at almost 99 per Add an article
the lowest
person
per Use synonyms
week
. In comparison, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
consumption
of Correct article usage
the consumption
lamp
Fix the agreement mistake
lamps
reach
Change the verb form
reaches
lowest
point from 2000 to 2002 at around 52 per Change the article
the lowest
person
per Use synonyms
week
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, week, person with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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