The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA aye in fast food restaurants between 2003 to 2013

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA aye in fast food restaurants between 2003 to 2013
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The chart illustrates the frequency of eating fast food in restaurants by the American population. The study was conducted in three different
years
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2003, 2006 and 2013 respectively.
Overall
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, people in the USA who consumed pizza or burgers were equally witnessed once a week and once or twice a month in both
years
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(2006, and 2013 respectively).
Whereas
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, every day and never eating accounted for the lowest. Looking at the details, 2003 once in a week or twice a month stood at 31% and 30% respectively.
However
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, the proportion considerably increased after 3
years
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to 33%
while
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once or twice a month declined to 25%.
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, people eat several times a week 20% in 2006 and after 7
years
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the trend of it decreased to 16%.
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, a few times a year equally accounted for 15% in 2006 and 2013.
In contrast
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, people who consume every day
together with
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never eat junk food accounted for less than 5% throughout the observed
years
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while
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never eat junk surged significantly to 5% in 2003.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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