The map below is of the town og Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map indicates two feasible divergent spots for a new supermarket in the village of Garlsdon.
One possible location(S1) is outside the town centre, in the countryside which is between the main roads and the
railway
. It is a closer place to the northwest (Hindon town) which is populated by 10,000. Use synonyms
Such
an area may ensure a bunch of parking space. Linking Words
Besides
, because it is near the Linking Words
railway
, a great number of people can visit there. Another analysis of the place is that it is so close to an industry area; that’s why, it may host visitors, as well.
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On the other hand
, the other likely spot is in the heart of the city which is located between two industry regions and in the vicinity of housing. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Branston village which is 16km away from the centre of Garlsdon, and Cransdon which includes 29,000 people, is 25km away. Both towns links to Garlsdon with the main road Linking Words
while
Cransdons Linking Words
also
has a Linking Words
railway
link. The Use synonyms
railway
line is nearby,too. So Use synonyms
this
spot is likely to entertain shoppers who can come from both northwest, southeast, and southwest.
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Overall
, neither location is perfect; Linking Words
however
, it seems that s2 has more connections with other towns and in a variety of ways than s1 has. Apart from that, its being in the heart of the centre is another advantage.Linking Words
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