The map below is of the town og Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town og Garlsdon. A new supermarket is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map indicates two feasible divergent spots for a new supermarket in the village of Garlsdon. One possible location(S1) is outside the town centre, in the countryside which is between the main roads and the
railway
. It is a closer place to the northwest (Hindon town) which is populated by 10,000.
Such
an area may ensure a bunch of parking space.
Besides
, because it is near the
railway
, a great number of people can visit there. Another analysis of the place is that it is so close to an industry area; that’s why, it may host visitors, as well.
On the other hand
, the other likely spot is in the heart of the city which is located between two industry regions and in the vicinity of housing.
Furthermore
, Branston village which is 16km away from the centre of Garlsdon, and Cransdon which includes 29,000 people, is 25km away. Both towns links to Garlsdon with the main road
while
Cransdons
also
has a
railway
link. The
railway
line is nearby,too. So
this
spot is likely to entertain shoppers who can come from both northwest, southeast, and southwest.
Overall
, neither location is perfect;
however
, it seems that s2 has more connections with other towns and in a variety of ways than s1 has. Apart from that, its being in the heart of the centre is another advantage.
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  • Infrastructure
  • Accessibility
  • Residential area
  • Commercial development
  • Traffic flow
  • Local employment
  • Economic impact
  • Ecological footprint
  • Congestion
  • Town expansion
  • Urban planning
  • Outskirts
  • Feasibility
  • Sustainability
  • Demographics
  • Necessities
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