Describe a toy you liked in your childhood. You should say: What kind of toy it is When you received it How you played it And how you felt about it

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When I was young, everyone must have had a lot of childhood toys
such
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as
teddy
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bears, puzzles and
superhero
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superheroes
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. And me
to
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too
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, my
favorite
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favourite
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toys
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toy
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in my childhood is
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a doraemon
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doraemon
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Doraemon
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teddy
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bear. On my 7th birthday, my mother gave
to
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it to
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me. When I was a kid, I
to play
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played
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with
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my
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family and pretend to be the
teddy
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bear
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bear's
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mother,
take
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taking
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care of and food. When I have
sad
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a sad
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thing , I often confide in
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teddy
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a teddy
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bear, when my mother is
way
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away
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, I will hug and sleep with
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teddy
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a teddy
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bear. Doraemon
teddy
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is my
favorite
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favourite
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childhood gift, and I have
experience
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experienced
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many memories with
me
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him
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, and I consider
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the doraemon
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doraemon
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Doraemon
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teddy
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as my little brother.
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