The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
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The table describes the statistics on underground railway systems of 6 different
countries
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with three categories.
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, the developed
countries
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London
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, Paris and Tokyo had far higher
figures
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than those of
Washington
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,
Kyoto
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and Los Angeles in each detail.
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Tokyo had by far the biggest
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with the exception of passengers per year, it was
Kyoto
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that showed the smallest
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. Focusing
firstly
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on Paris and Tokyo , the
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for kilometres of the route were 1999 and 1927 respectively.
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,
Kyoto
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and Los Angeles showed the reverse of the higher
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. Los Angels had significantly more passengers annually year than
Kyoto
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with corresponding
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of 50 and 45 respectively, in 1981 and 2001. Regarding the average developed
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,
London
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had higher
numbers
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in each detail than those of
Washington
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.
Although
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the
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of both
countries
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in terms of kilometres of route(394 for
London
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and 126 for
Washington
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) and passengers per year were higher both
countries
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( 775 for
London
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and 144 for
Washington
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)
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, london, figures, washington, kyoto, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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