The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
The table describes the statistics on underground railway systems of 6 different
countries
with three categories.
Overall
, the developed
countries
London
, Paris and Tokyo had far higher
figures
than those of
Washington
,
Kyoto
and Los Angeles in each detail.
While
Tokyo had by far the biggest
numbers
with the exception of passengers per year, it was
Kyoto
that showed the smallest
numbers
. Focusing
firstly
on Paris and Tokyo , the
figures
for kilometres of the route were 1999 and 1927 respectively.
In contrast
,
Kyoto
and Los Angeles showed the reverse of the higher
numbers
. Los Angels had significantly more passengers annually year than
Kyoto
with corresponding
figures
of 50 and 45 respectively, in 1981 and 2001. Regarding the average developed
countries
,
London
had higher
numbers
in each detail than those of
Washington
.
Although
the
figures
of both
countries
in terms of kilometres of route(394 for
London
and 126 for
Washington
) and passengers per year were higher both
countries
( 775 for
London
and 144 for
Washington
)
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