The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
The two maps illustrate how a
town
looked in 1990 and after the construction of how it was in 2010. It is evident that the Use synonyms
town
has greatly modernized with the addition of new facilities and the transformation and relocation of existing features.
In 1990, the forest of the Use synonyms
town
could be seen in the north-east side which was opposed to the mountains in the north-west.
Ancient structures and rare plants and animals could be found on the left, Use synonyms
while
villages at the right.
Linking Words
However
, in 2010, the Linking Words
town
witnessed many alternations. The most noticeable one perhaps has happened on the northern side of the Use synonyms
map
. The river which split the Use synonyms
map
into two was running from the between the Use synonyms
map
transferred to the southern side. The forest, the ancient structure and the mountains had been cleared to make a lake. Rore plants and animals have been converted into electricity and the villages were moved to the bottom of the Use synonyms
map
. And it was cleared to make a hotel, Use synonyms
Finally
, the river could be seen at the bottom of the Linking Words
map
with a reduction and it can lead to a hydroelectric power dam.Use synonyms
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