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The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years. The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years. The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.
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The given bar chart illustrates the data of qualification among
adults
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 based on the range of
education
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providers
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 in Canada. The data is divided into three decades which are 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall
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, there were four
education
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providers
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 that accounted for
this
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 data, with High
School
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 as the highest contributor for
education
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providers
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 among Canadian
Adults
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. In terms of the trend, most
providers
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 experienced growth,
nonetheless
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 only one saw a remaining
number
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. In 1981, High
School
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 contributed almost a quarter (23%) of the
education
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 level among
adults
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.
In contrast
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, college was the least provider that constituted in
adults
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 qualification at 9%. In the following year, high
school
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 and college increased gradually with the same exact
number
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 by 3%.
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, in 2001, high
school
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 and college reached a peak
number
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 of 28% and 18%, respectively.
Furthermore
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, University
Education
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 started at 10% in 1981 before facing a rise in 1991 and 2001 at 13% and 18%, respectively. In the meantime, Trades was the only provider that was stable with the exact same
number
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 during 3 decades at 11%.
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, the trend of High schools, colleges, and Universities faced an increase,
while
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 sole Trades remained with the same proportion.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, education, providers, school, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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