The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram compares the Liverton Docks of 1980 and the present day.
Overall
, by analyzing both maps, it is clearly shown that it has undergone significant transformations to establish Linking Words
the
modern amenities Correct article usage
apply
such
as an educational Linking Words
center
, sailing club, kid's play Change the spelling
centre
area
and museum.
In 1980, Liverton Docks consisted of only warehouses and cranes on each Use synonyms
side
of the river. One crane was located between two warehouses on the north Use synonyms
side
, Use synonyms
while
the southern Linking Words
side
had one crane and one warehouse. Use synonyms
Additionally
, four ships were navigating into Linking Words
river
Correct article usage
the river
whereas
three of them were directed towards the coastal Linking Words
area
.
Today, Use synonyms
few
warehouses have been replaced with an education Correct article usage
a few
center
and residential apartments. Change the spelling
centre
Along with
that, new buildings have been created Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
sailing
club and hotel. Correct article usage
a sailing
Additionally
, Linking Words
kid's
playing Correct article usage
the kid's
area
has been situated beside Use synonyms
sailing
club and parking has been located near apartments for individual use. Correct article usage
the sailing
Furthermore
, the bridge has been created Linking Words
along with
the flood barrier on the east Linking Words
side
towards the coastal Use synonyms
area
. More interestingly, multiple ships have been changed into ship Use synonyms
museum
for entertainment purposes.Fix the agreement mistake
museums
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally, along with, such".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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