🔶Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. 🔸Do you agree or disagree?

As a number of processed eatable products

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as coke or cakes include a huge

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of

sugar

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, which posters health problems, it is argued that sugary food and drink should be sold at more high

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to reduce individuals’

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intake

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.

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I am fully aware of the dangers of taking

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excessively, I firmly believe that

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cannot affect

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consumption, and there is a better way than that.

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with,

prices

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and

sugar

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intake

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are irrelevant. Meanwhile, only a few people are likely to reduce their purchases of products which contain a large

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of

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,

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of them are willing to pay higher

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if manufacturers increased the costs of these foods and beverages like ice cream and Sprites.

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, in South Korea, even though the

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price increase of cigarettes, nearly doubled, smokers did not halt smoking.

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proves there is no relevance between

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consumption and its price. On top of that, there are better ways to discourage people from ingesting a large

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of

sugar

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. One of them is to indicate how much

sugar

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consumers take from manufactured food and beverages, which reminds them of the risk of

sugar

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intake

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.

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, if companies put side effects of obsessive

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intake

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on the products, it could be beneficial to those who try not to purchase sweetened groceries.

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, some candy companies let their customers know the

sugar

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content of their candies and give a warning about overdosing on them, which encourages individuals to spend money wisely. In conclusion, it is obvious that excessive

sugar

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ingestion brings about illnesses.

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, informing the

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of

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and side effects from it is more persuasive than raising the

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of processed food and drinks.