MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information ba selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. 

Summarize the information ba selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The chart compares oversea students coming from 4 different nations in Australia.
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, the arrival from Indonesia and Singapore recorded a profound jump throughout the surveyed period, and people coming from Hong Kong and Malaysia
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increased over time. Starting with a quite modest number of nearly zero in 1982, Indonesian students travelled to Australia more in the next
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to reach one-tenth in 1993, before climbing more than 15% to hit a peak at more than a quarter in 1998 and fluctuating a bit
at the end
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of the duration, winding up at the first place. Sharing the same trend is Singapore when the statistic of abroad students from
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country remained at almost zero in the first 5
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, followed by a gradual increase from 1987 to reach the highest in 2000 at 20%, occupying the second place. The number of visitors to education from Hong Kong stayed at zero for 5
years
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until escalating to 5% in 1988. From that point on, it showed some slight positive changes to reach 10% in 1995, before skyrocketing to its peak at nearly one-fifth in 1997. The hype was followed by a downtrend in the next 2
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and a small recovery in the
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year to finish third with approximately 18%. In terms of Malaysia, from the highest initial point of 5%, it raised a bit to 8% in the next year and
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slowly increased to under 10% in 1994.
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number sped up from 1994 to 1997 to make its top of 18% and swung around 17% in the
last
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phase.
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