Some companies sponsor sport and sport star as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The importance of

sport

has now become more debatable with many people claiming that some companies should support it as an effective advertisement

while

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others reject

this

notion. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on my arguments related

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benefits and demerits of

this

trend,

as well as

lead to some conclusions. The first and foremost evidence to prove

this

option is beneficial is

that

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the profit.

In other words

, by sponsoring famous

sport

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stars, the sponsors can gain a huge amount of money from athletes’s fans worldwide.

For instance

, Adidas

supporting

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Argentina at Worldcup 2022,

then

when

this

nation became the worldwide champion,

this

brand

achieves

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a variety of incomes by purchasing clothes and items related to Messi and his teammates.

Secondly

, if agencies cooperate with well-known athletes, their brand names will become more famous too. Owing to

great

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fame of

sportmen

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sportsmen

, there will be a range of customers who are willing to

expend

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on the products of companies. Undoubtedly, cooperation between sponsors and

sportmen

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sportsmen

brings enormous benefits to both sides.

On the other hand

,

beside

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advantages, there are some disadvantages of

this

notion. Some claim that it is

wasteful

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expenditures

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expenditure

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on too

much

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many sports

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sport

items. In simple words, some admirers can spend a lot of money on

gloceries

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groceries

as a way to present their love to

favourite

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athletes.

This

situation

lead

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to uneconomical spending habits for society

especially

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youngsters.

Moreover

, the cooperation between agencies and

sportmen

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sportsmen

can be destroyed if either party has notorious fame. In conclusion, the demerits of

this

trend are generally overshadowed by those benefits.

Therefore

, the

influences

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influence

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of

sport

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sports

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advertisements will increase continuously in the future.