Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use?

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It is undeniable that youngsters should acquire the quality to differentiate between what is
right
and what is wrong. Some people believe that there is no other option except punishment to teach
children
this
quality. I personally disagree with
this
situation because that might be deleterious for the
children
and harmfully affect their
mind
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. To start with, some attributes should be
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younsters
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youngsters
at
their
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very early
ages
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and the ideas of
right
and wrong are one of them. Teaching
children
about
the
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right
and wrong
require
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some
effectitive
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effective
techniques
as well as
patience.
Although
it seems controversial and old, punishment is still regarded as
the
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way of teaching
right
and wrong to
children
among many parents and teachers.
However
, there are doubts about whether
this
methodology of teaching
right
and wrong is appropriate and effective or not. Rather it has raised a lot of concern among specialists about its adverse ramification on the development and
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of
the
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children
.
Conversely
, there are
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plenty of ways which make
children
well aware of
right
and wrong. In their childhood,
for instance
, they might have some opportunities of learning stories from their elders which could motivate them to decide and differentiate
right
and wrong.
Moreover
, as
children
are imitate
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their parents and elders, they might be acted as
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role
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in the lives of their
children
. To illustrate,
this
technique would have a longstanding effect throughout the lives of the
children
.
Hence
,
children
should be
tought
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taught
rights and
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wrong
wrongs
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with
giving them punishment.
To conclude
,
concept
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of
right
and wrong among
children
would not be attained overnight by
children
without rigorous practice and effective
learnings
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. Parents and teachers should be aware
about
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it and work
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that way.
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