You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you've done since the source suggests another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to give my feedback

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the cookery course I took

last

month.

Firstly

, the course was really enjoyable. I really appreciate how you and your team made

such

a fun and knowledgeable activity,

moreover

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the

teacher

was super helpful, she

also

has a lot of great tips and tricks to bake.

Such

as giving

any

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ideas on how to make a choco lava without an oven,

that

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was very useful for me as the one who wanted to save my electricity bills.

Although

, at

first,

I actually doubted taking

this

class because I did not have any cooking abilities

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skill

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. But, the curriculum,

teacher

, staff, friends and facilities were assisted.

In addition

, the guidebook and the

teacher

used very simple words,

hence

I could easily understand.

Overall

, I found

this

course not only enjoyable but

also

fun. Even though I was afraid at

first,

the

teacher

there was really helpful.

Thus

, I could easily conclude that I would like to join another class if you create another one.