The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

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The US
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industry
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is renowned for its films and multicultural support. There is no doubt that the US
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industry
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is highly influenced around the
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and I support
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to some extent. There are some factors where I agree with the US authority's duty to protect their culture as well. Let's discuss them
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in detail.
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, US movies are highly appreciated around the
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and watched in huge numbers. The major reason behind
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which I believe is that they involve the art of different countries and include their lifestyle and highlight popular things.
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, the recent movie Fast and Furious 9 has many scenes from Japan and India. They portray a role of an Indian-origin man in the movie.
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the artist is Indian born, which connects with the audience and they appreciate that US movie show Indian characters.
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, Attaining more audiences from around the
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and increasing the revenue of a
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can only be achieved by screening movies in different countries. To achieve
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a strong relationship is required to maintain and growth of the US
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, to increase the business you have to understand the different tastes of the audience and to adapt their culture as well.
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, Government's duty to invest in the US
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to protect and develop their art is equally important.
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recently I watched a
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where it was dominated by Chinese art which is against as per US ethics which the US ministry must be looking to control. for similar ,reasons I believe US Government should protect and develop at the same time. In conclusion, as already mentioned US
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industry
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doing well
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yes they are influenced from around the
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I believe the US authority should invest money to protect and develop their culture without enforcement rules to destroy the creativity of the US
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Americanisation
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Local cinema
  • Cultural diversity
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Film subsidies
  • National identity
  • Artistic expression
  • Blockbusters
  • Cultural preservation
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