Historical objects should be brought back their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that historical
artefacts
and objects should be returned to their authentic owners.
Although
this
might be ethical, I strongly disagree with
this
and think that
this
may
bring
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ruin the peace and take away the pride of the conquerors. To start with, the return of
artefacts
will bring conflicts between the
countries
. As a matter of fact, during the ancient time, the world was geographically different to what it is now.
Therefore
, the
object
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conquered from one kingdom may now be separate
countries
.
Furthermore
, it would be a challenge to find its original owner.
For example
, Kohinoor was taken by the British when India and Pakistan were one. Recently when it was demanded to get the Kohinoor diamond back, the
countries
had an argument over the original owner, as Kohinoor, was the possession of Maharaja Ranjit Singh, who ruled the Punjab kingdom which is now in India
as well as
Pakistan.
Hence
, the return of historical items can disrupt world peace.
Secondly
, these
artefacts
are the pride of the
countries
who possess them now. These items signify the sacrifices made by the Martyrs and the historic power of the nation. In historic times, war and power decided who would rule and own,
although
, the conquerors might not be the original owners. They possess these gaining strength and losing armies.
For example
, during colonisation, the British took some
artefacts
from India and it was possible only because of their power.
Therefore
, pride and historical contributions should be respected and the
countries
should not give back the
artefacts
they now possess.
To conclude
, in order to maintain world peace and devote respect to historical events, the
artefacts
should remain where they are now.
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Grammar
Artifacts are singular: 'artefact' should be 'artifact' or 'artefact' throughout the essay.
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