many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree or disagree with this statement or not?
many people said that it is prefer owning their home to renting it. The writer disagrees with
this
statement and will explain why in the following essay.
Firstly
, it is not crucial to have a house
because it would cost you lots of money
, not only the money
you pay to be a landlord but also
cost you more money
to build the house
such
as building materials, builder's fees, building permit
, Fix the agreement mistake
permits
house
Correct word choice
and house
designer
. Replace the word
design
Secondly
, the change in the world makes people will feel bored with their house
rapidly or dissatisfy with their house
. Therefore
, the owner would spend more money
to catch up with the new.
However
, if you change your accommodation, you can design your house
whatever you like it looks and
gain more experience from time to time. Change preposition
like and
Otherwise
, if you really want to buy a house
when you to poor , you need to loan money
. It would interupt
you with huge loans and increases the interest. Correct your spelling
interrupt
Therefore
, you would never assume money
for an emergency situation in your life.
To conclude
, I feel that owning a home can be a pleasurable experience if done within a budget. However
, it could turn into a negative situation when a person buys a home by getting a loan that is
way beyond his repaying capacity.Submitted by [email protected] on
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