A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern word. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

From the time aeroplane introduced globally, the number of
people
travelling by them increased dramatically for tourism purposes only.
However
,
this
trend might bring many benefits for local
people
in tourist attractions and become the main revenue for them, without having a plan for it, it might increase many
issues
and may
cause
drawbacks to overwhelm its benefit. Starting with the advantages of
this
business, the main and most important one is the monetary benefit that brings to some slums distinct. Not only it brings pure money profit but
also
it might
cause
developing and maintaining the constructions, infrastructures and amenities of the historical
places
.
This
is because mostly these
places
used to be poor
areas
and by increasing the number of tourists it would become feasible to invest in and maintain monuments, sculptures and old buildings at the governmental level.
Hence
, simulounasly local
people
and their governments have to persist in managing, investing and developing their
areas
. turning to drawbacks might
cause
people
who come for a holiday to a place,
although
they bring a lot of money and spend them on that place, they could
also
initiate many
issues
for the local culture. The main concern is cultural behaviour that might change by tourism in children and globalization. Many adolescents nowadays are passionate about globalisation and they are not like any more living in rural
areas
and the infected by
people
from other cultures.
this
trend causes huge migration from these
places
to metropolitan
areas
. Tourism
also
might not care about the history and they might damage the monuments either intentionally or by mistake. They
also
might not throw out their rubbish in specific
places
for that purpose and impact the environmental
issues
of that city. These
issues
are the main reason that both government and local
people
have to try to make a plan for managing these problems and reducing their impacts. In conclusion,
although
tourist attractions all around the world can bring many benefits ,especially revenue and development in tourist attraction
places
, not managing and having any plan for preservation might
cause
issues
the most concerning one being under cultural attack, wrecking sculptures and bringing many environmental
issues
.
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