The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The map illustrates a period at present and develops
Correct article usage
the archievement
archievement
of Hunderstone town.
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achievement
To begin
, the percentage of pupils in voluntary-controlled schools
fell from just over half to only 20% or one fifth
from 2000 to 2009. Add a hyphen
one-fifth
Similarly
, the relative number of children in grammar schools
- just under one quarter - dropped by half in the same period. As for the specialist schools
, the relatively small percentage of pupils attending this
type of school (12%) also
fell, although
not significantly.
However
, while
the other three types of school
declined in importance, the opposite was true in the case of community Fix the agreement mistake
schools
schools
. In fact, whereas
only a small minority of 12% were educated in these schools
in 2000, this
figure increased to well over half of all pupils during the following nine years.Submitted by pramai177 on
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