The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the destination of Anthropology graduates
students
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from a specific university. The table compares the salaries of those individuals after five
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work
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in three different types of employment.
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, we can see that most of the
students
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chose to
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or study after their graduation,
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just a small number did nothing and were unemployed.
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, many
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' salaries were more than $100,000. Roughly half of the Anthropology graduates worked full time, and 15% of them chose part-time
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, in comparison with those who continued their study (8%) and worked and studied simultaneously (5%),
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number was more than 50%.
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, about one-tenth of
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were unemployed. After five years’
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in three different sectors namely freelance consultant, government sector and private companies just about 5% to 10% of their salaries were under $50,000. Half of the people who worked in the government sector received more than $100,000 which
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the most among other sectors. Most people who earned about $50,000 to $75,000 were from private companies. The group of people who earned about $75,000 to $100,000 mostly were freelancers.
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