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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreigh countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad oughweigh the drawbacks?

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Nowadays student planning and going to study abroad are increasing day by day. No doubt, studying in foreign countries will cost more but
this
 will help
students
 in getting foreign exposure and the ability to live on their own legs. I believe that foreign experience is very helpful for
students
 as
this
 will open a new horizon of thinking in their minds. I absolutely agree that studying beyond borders will cost more and
students
 have to suffer a lot for accommodation, aloneness, and a lot of other problems.
Moreover
, some
students
 abroad get disrupted from their track as there is no one present for them to check them. Some
students
 forgot their dream and get involved in the wrong businesses like prostitution, drug smuggling, etc. Despite of negative impacts, foreign exposure lead
students
 to live their
life
 fully. As they have to do all stuff in their lives themselves without the help of their parents.
This
 will make them independent in their
life
.
This
 will
also
 explore the hidden talents of the
students
 which will never come out if they study in their own
country
 because they know they have someone in their
life
 whom they can take help or advice anytime.
Hence
, they never put pressure on their own brains and live their
life
 as dependent on each other. In the end, I would like
to conclude
 that going to foreign countries to study is not bad if you want to learn something new in your
life
 and want to implement a good part of their culture after coming back to your
country
. If you going just for the sake of independence and doing the wrong things which you can never do in your home
country
due to
 the presence of your parents,
then
 you are good in your own
country
.
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