many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it . do you agree with this statement or not ?

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A number of society believe that
purchase
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homes
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of renting them is better . In my point of view , there are more
positive
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to owning a
home
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as it can be an investment and offers a
convinient
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convenient
lifestlye
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lifestyle
. The first reason why
i
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agree with
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statement is the opportunities of investment in buying a
home
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.
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is because the price of
house
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the house
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usually
rise
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as the
evironment
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environment
surround develop .
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is true in
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case that in the recent survey of UK news show that more than 4% has been
rise
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in house's price . The second reason
of
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for
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owning a
home
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is greater as it offers a sense of enjoyable lifestyle . To explain , the owner can have
an
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ability
of being
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independent and accomplishable when there
is
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no rules or
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forbidden
forbiddance
from anyone.
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its
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benefits
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benefits
benifits
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people will be more and more confident with their
home
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In conclusion , there are more advantages
in
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owning a
home
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rather than leasing it
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it can be a potential investment in the future and allow people can
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access
acess
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access
to a more comfortable lifestyle
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • property ladder
  • mortgage
  • rental agreement
  • down payment
  • equity
  • appreciate
  • rental market
  • monthly installments
  • credit score
  • repairs and maintenance
  • landlord
  • tenant
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