Nowadays many children have access to the internet and a large number of children enjoy playing online games. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In
this
globalization era, the accessibility of the internet makes children
addicted to online games
. Although
there is a positive side of
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to
this
phenomenon, I believe that the negative sides are greater than the advantages.
It is undeniable that playing games
is essential for children
to stimulate the brain. It is commonly believed that children
are still in the phase of brain development. That is
the reason why it is always good to give some treatment that can improve their ability of thinking
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to think
For example
, children
who are exposed to online games
usually have good English skills because most online applications use English. Also
, having puzzle games
in leisure time could help children
to think fast to solve some cases.
On the other hand
, there are several drawbacks that still make some parents anxious about online games
. Spending too much time in front of a laptop might damage eyes
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the eyes
especially
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, especially
children
. Additionally
, adolescents would find it hard to manage their time between study
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studying
play
because they are addicted to online Wrong verb form
playing
games
. To illustrate, nowadays it is obvious that many pupils prefer to play online games
in the middle of the class. This
might be dangerous for their attitude in the future.
To sum up
, in my perspective playing online games
is still acceptable to some extent as long as their parents always take control of it. However
, it is inevitable that online games
could be something that becomes harmful for the younger generation such
as an addiction habit.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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