The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
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The supplied map indicates information about the two possibilities where a new supermart can be constructed in Garlsdon.Both the proposed location is kept in mind with the locality and availability of transportation.
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, keep in mind there are more industrial areas covered in comparison with the residential area.One of the possible options S2 outweighs more advantages than S1 as it is located in the town centre.
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with, it is quite evident that S2 has more accessibility in terms of people or conveyance.It is situated at a point where two other towns are nearby (Bransdon and Cransdon) which are away from the town centre at a distance of 16 km and 25 km respectively.
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, the number of people living is between 15000 to 29000. Moving ahead,S1 is situated in the countryside which is near the town of Hindon and has 10,000 individuals staying.Near to which there is easy access to trains and to the main roads.,
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there can be less traffic experienced at
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place.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Congestion
  • Economic benefits
  • Environmental impact
  • Foot traffic
  • Green space
  • Job creation
  • Local property values
  • Parking availability
  • Pollution
  • Proximity
  • Public transportation
  • Sustainability
  • Traffic patterns
  • Residential areas
  • Shopping convenience
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