the graphs below show about the presentage of the populations for asian countries living in the cities from 1970 to 2020

the graphs below show about the presentage of the populations for asian countries living in the cities from 1970 to 2020
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The line graphs illustrate the percentage of the population living in the cities, of the main countries in Asia, including the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia, between 1970 to 2020. The graphs
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show the prediction for 2030 to 2040.
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the population in the cities are growing from 1970 to 2020 and is predicted to continue
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in 2040. Of four countries, Malaysia has continued rapid
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from 30% in 1970 to 70% in 2020, followed by Indonesia which had the same pattern of
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from 15% in 1970 to 50% in 2020.
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, the Philippines had a different pattern, starting with rapid
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from 30% in 1970 to almost 50% in 1990,
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slightly bounced back to 40% in 2010, and back to gradual
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afterwards.
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, Thailand had smoothly elevated from 1970 to 2020. For the future prediction, all the numbers are increased
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from 2030 to 2040. The diagram showed that Malaysia will be on the top of
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for almost 80% in 2040, followed by Indonesia in the second place,
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the Philippines and Thailand in the
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place.
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